Selling an Old Bike

The class was asked to sell a very old and dilapidated bike or one that was very unusual. They had to use a descriptive vocabulary to create images within their words while hooking the reader in with the ideas they were writing about.

Below is Dylan's advertisement for a rather unique bike.

Selling A Bike

BUY YOUR IMMACULATE 1 WHEELER  MOTORBIKE NOW

Hello ladies and gentleman this is Dylan from the house just around the corner, I have a huge announcement to make, I am selling a non normal motorbike but looks super RAD.

COME ON DOWN TO DYLAN’S YARD SALE THIS AFTERNOON AT 3pm.

THIS MOTORBIKE IS NOT JUST AN ORDINARY MOTORBIKE, THIS IS AN IMMACULATE 1 WHEELER MOTORBIKE.

So If you're looking for a new fantastic funky motorbike I recommend this bike for you and it’s only $00.99

CONTACT DETAILS DOWN HERE

6 Nimon St, Havelock North, Hawke’s Bay, New Zealand

PHONE NUMBER 0800 56789

Comes with a free helmet with a logo that says ULTRA RAD

Nicole's advertisement uses Show not Tell to help to 'sell' her bike.

Selling a Bike

       For Sale an amazing bike that has been loved by its owner!

• Wheels: Rusty and Bent, to give the you less speed to be safer.
• Tyres: Dented, Deflated and Free holes, to stop you from having to worry about going over bumpy roads.
• Handlebars: Twisted and Stretched out, to give you back exercises.
• Seat: Flat and Even, to keep your butt from being really sore.

       

     And….

     It is only $9.99 so you can get it today!

     All you have to do is call 0800 112 116 Right Now!