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Sunday 9 October 2016

Interpreting the Poem, 'Uncle Tu

This is Dylan's interpretation of Glenn Colquhoun's poem, Uncle Tu.
After reading and responding to this poem, the class was then asked to create their own relating to a person they know or knew.

Uncle Tu
Glenn Colquhoun


Walt: interpret figures of speech in a poem.


If you want to see him go to a river,
Look under the round water.                                     Yellow= Personification
Find the rock carved bluntly.                                    Blue= Similes
It should be greenstone.                                            Red= Metaphor
                                                                                     Green= Word I don’t know

Its eyes may swim to the surface like fish.


He is like that.


If you want to see him go to the top of a mountain.
Look down through the clouds.
Find the ground’s face.
This is Personification because the ground doesn't actually have a face
The eyes made of water. The volcanic nose.
This is Personification because water don’t have eyes
His bush lips and unshaven stubble.
Find the deep lines that a stream makes-
the skull of rock at his temples blown smooth
by wind and rain and the falling of trees.
This is a mixture of Personification and a Metaphor because rocks don’t have a skull.


The immediate distance.


He is like that.


If you want to see him, go to a church.
The walls should be made of wood.
The pews will be oak.
Stand inside on the smooth floor.
Breathe in the smell of the polish.
Wait for the bell to be rung.


Listen to the strong sound of the hammer on the iron.
It should be clear.


He is like that.


If you want to see him go to a place where treasure is kept.
Stand over a glass box.
Look inside for things that are worn.
The blunt tiki.
The smooth handle on a walking stick.
The old korowai sleeping
with a head tucked beneath her feathers.


Find the stone mere chipped around the edges.
.


And he is like that.


Definition for words I don’t know


Stubble: Short, Stiff hairs growing on a man’s face when he has not shaved for a while
Immediate: Occurring or done at once basically instant.
Korowai: A korowai is a cloak with feathers and tassels.


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  1. Room 17 @ HNI 2017
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    SUNDAY, 9 OCTOBER 2016
    Interpreting the Poem, 'Uncle Tu
    This is Dylan's interpretation of Glenn Colquhoun's poem, Uncle Tu.
    After reading and responding to this poem, the class was then asked to create their own relating to a person they know or knew.

    Uncle Tu
    Glenn Colquhoun


    Walt: interpret figures of speech in a poem.


    If you want to see him go to a river,
    Look under the round water. Yellow= Personification
    Find the rock carved bluntly. Blue= Similes
    It should be greenstone. Red= Metaphor
    Green= Word I don’t know

    Its eyes may swim to the surface like fish.


    He is like that.


    If you want to see him go to the top of a mountain.
    Look down through the clouds.
    Find the ground’s face.
    This is Personification because the ground doesn't actually have a face
    The eyes made of water. The volcanic nose.
    This is Personification because water don’t have eyes
    His bush lips and unshaven stubble.
    Find the deep lines that a stream makes-
    the skull of rock at his temples blown smooth
    by wind and rain and the falling of trees.
    This is a mixture of Personification and a Metaphor because rocks don’t have a skull.


    The immediate distance.


    He is like that.


    If you want to see him, go to a church.
    The walls should be made of wood.
    The pews will be oak.
    Stand inside on the smooth floor.
    Breathe in the smell of the polish.
    Wait for the bell to be rung.


    Listen to the strong sound of the hammer on the iron.
    It should be clear.


    He is like that.


    If you want to see him go to a place where treasure is kept.
    Stand over a glass box.
    Look inside for things that are worn.
    The blunt tiki.
    The smooth handle on a walking stick.
    The old korowai sleeping
    with a head tucked beneath her feathers.


    Find the stone mere chipped around the edges.
    .


    And he is like that.


    Definition for words I don’t know


    Stubble: Short, Stiff hairs growing on a man’s face when he has not shaved for a while
    Immediate: Occurring or done at once basically instant.
    Korowai: A korowai is a cloak with feathers and tassels.



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  2. Can you not add your comments in the poem and leave it afterwards, or if you are going to add it atleast change the colour or the font.

    Thank you, I'm very cool

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